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A long
preparation and lots of rehearsals
had
been done
Before
the final day had come…
I knew
she would say yes,
But
still was a touch nervous…
I asked
“will you divorce me”
She
said “yes I will”
And
finally I escaped…!!!
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haha! Only the going down on knees part was remaining!
ReplyDeleteOne correction is that you have to put 'escape' as your blog title. You can use 55 fiction as a tag if you want.
wao... short yet powerful :D
ReplyDeleteloved the story :D
hmm.. i've heard "will u marry me?" before, but this was a new twist! :D lol.
ReplyDeleteall the best for BATOM!! :)
Escape
Oops what a twist :P ....Lol!!!
ReplyDeletemicro escape story- nice.
ReplyDeleteShort, sweet and twisted! :D
ReplyDeletelucky guy..no no luckiest guy...
ReplyDeleteno no no....
the most luckiest guy :)
Funny but at the same time thought provoking. I was thinking that the guy was going to propose to her but you gave a great twist. Lucky fellow, finally he escaped!
ReplyDeleteSureindran R. - Escape
Ha ha ha. Good one. Effectively execute short one with a twist.
ReplyDeleteYou twisted mind!! Just loved it!!! :D
ReplyDeleteDoes it have any connection to the recent Grand Hyderabad Wedding of Two Sports Stars??!! ;)
Hi,
ReplyDeleteWow! And I thought he was gonna propose her. The ending really surprised me.
Nice story. :)
Cheers!
Nethra
Good for you ! :P
ReplyDeletein love with me and life..escape !
Haha...liked this one!!! =D
ReplyDelete@Saurabh
ReplyDeleteThanks for the timely correction
@Rajlakshmi
Welcome to ma blog..
Hope you keep comin back
@Leo
an Indian tongue twister
@Dhiman
lol
@Gyanban
ReplyDeleteThank you so much
@Guria
55 twists
@MK
Actually!!
@Sureindran
Yeah it seemed like that al the way till it stuck me the other way round
@Fool
Ha ha lol
@Rumya
ReplyDeleteNothing to that weeding…
@Nethra
That was the best it could be…
@Sourav
Thank you..!!
@Babbler
lol..
lol.. nice one karan.. especially the last line sounded too hilarious :D
ReplyDeleteGood one Karan...liked the twist...
ReplyDeleteAll the beat for BAT 10
interesting proposal.... :)
ReplyDeletenot to s start instead to an end...
cheers,
The Variable, Crazy Over Desserts - Nachiketa
Catch me on facebook @ Crazy Over Desserts
Ha ha ha :D good one! good twist :) good luck for BATOM!
ReplyDeleteshort and powerful!
ReplyDeletehaha.. I really thought he was gonna propose :P "And then I escaped" :)) good one
ReplyDeleteLOL :)
ReplyDelete@Vipul
ReplyDeletewelcome to the blog
keep dropping in
@Geeta
glad you liked it
thank you so much
@Nachiketa
at times the world turns upside down for you
@VLK
@Mehak
thank you guys
@AK
ReplyDeletehehehe :D
@Shilpa
lol
Hey a 55 fictioner!!
ReplyDelete:~)
nice one! As Vipul said..the last line brought in more flavor!
Nice one!
@Yemiledu
ReplyDeletewelcome to Scrible
Thank you so much..
keep reflecting
1 tha raja 1 thi raani dono mar gaye khatm kahani .......loved thi s one....
ReplyDelete@Mukul
ReplyDeletewelocme to my blog..
keep dropping by..
This is a nice take. A proposal for divorce. Interesting. Glad they both wanted the same thing though :)
ReplyDeletetrue, both wanting the same things make such parting an easier affair!!
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