Saturday, May 1, 2010

55 Fiction # 1 - Escape

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A long preparation and lots of rehearsals
had been done
Before the final day had come…
I knew she would say yes,
But still was a touch nervous…
I asked “will you divorce me”
She said “yes I will”

And finally I escaped…!!!



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31 comments:

  1. haha! Only the going down on knees part was remaining!

    One correction is that you have to put 'escape' as your blog title. You can use 55 fiction as a tag if you want.

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  2. wao... short yet powerful :D
    loved the story :D

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  3. hmm.. i've heard "will u marry me?" before, but this was a new twist! :D lol.

    all the best for BATOM!! :)

    Escape

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  4. Oops what a twist :P ....Lol!!!

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  5. Short, sweet and twisted! :D

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  6. lucky guy..no no luckiest guy...
    no no no....
    the most luckiest guy :)

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  7. Funny but at the same time thought provoking. I was thinking that the guy was going to propose to her but you gave a great twist. Lucky fellow, finally he escaped!

    Sureindran R. - Escape

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  8. Ha ha ha. Good one. Effectively execute short one with a twist.

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  9. You twisted mind!! Just loved it!!! :D
    Does it have any connection to the recent Grand Hyderabad Wedding of Two Sports Stars??!! ;)

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  10. Hi,

    Wow! And I thought he was gonna propose her. The ending really surprised me.
    Nice story. :)

    Cheers!
    Nethra

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  11. @Saurabh
    Thanks for the timely correction

    @Rajlakshmi
    Welcome to ma blog..
    Hope you keep comin back

    @Leo
    an Indian tongue twister

    @Dhiman
    lol

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  12. @Gyanban
    Thank you so much

    @Guria
    55 twists

    @MK
    Actually!!

    @Sureindran
    Yeah it seemed like that al the way till it stuck me the other way round

    @Fool
    Ha ha lol

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  13. @Rumya
    Nothing to that weeding…

    @Nethra
    That was the best it could be…

    @Sourav
    Thank you..!!

    @Babbler
    lol..

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  14. lol.. nice one karan.. especially the last line sounded too hilarious :D

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  15. Good one Karan...liked the twist...

    All the beat for BAT 10

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  16. Ha ha ha :D good one! good twist :) good luck for BATOM!

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  17. haha.. I really thought he was gonna propose :P "And then I escaped" :)) good one

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  18. @Vipul
    welcome to the blog
    keep dropping in

    @Geeta
    glad you liked it
    thank you so much

    @Nachiketa
    at times the world turns upside down for you

    @VLK
    @Mehak
    thank you guys

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  19. Hey a 55 fictioner!!
    :~)
    nice one! As Vipul said..the last line brought in more flavor!
    Nice one!

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  20. @Yemiledu
    welcome to Scrible
    Thank you so much..
    keep reflecting

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  21. 1 tha raja 1 thi raani dono mar gaye khatm kahani .......loved thi s one....

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  22. @Mukul
    welocme to my blog..
    keep dropping by..

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  23. This is a nice take. A proposal for divorce. Interesting. Glad they both wanted the same thing though :)

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    Replies
    1. true, both wanting the same things make such parting an easier affair!!

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