Thursday, December 5, 2013

55 Fiction # 12 - Conditions Apply

Source - Google Images

down on one knee, looking straight at her,
he said –
dreams in those eyes I will fulfill,
those lips will always bear a smile,
I don’t promise you the sky in a while,
but your heart will never whine
will you be mine
she said – yes I will, but *conditions apply

~    Karan

These days the candor, integrity and honesty have all got lost. The relationships, love, devotion has all become materialistic. How much ever one is sincere in his feelings the reciprocation is not bound to same always.


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16 comments:

  1. Oooo, that is cold!! Good take on the prompt! ♥

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    1. it indeed is very cold...but unfortunately is a reality these days...people are ready to compromise everything else for materialistic pleasures...grim fact !!!

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  2. loved the cute pic and a lovely poem. In love there are no conditions.

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    1. thank you so much Kalpana, ideally there shouldn't be any conditions no matter what :)

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    1. that made me smile from ear to ear :)

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  4. *sigh* conditions apply is such a risky term... specially when it is used with something as beautiful as love !

    Nice one.... completely relatable!

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    1. it surely is and your trademark *sigh* makes it sound more riskier :P ;)

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  5. Conditions apply is such a risky term specially when it used with something as beautiful as love <3

    Loved this version of love.... precarious!

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    1. when you have waited for someone's comment and word of appreciation on your blog and you get two instead of one...you know god is being kind to you...tyms for dropping by :)

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    1. thank you so much Shilpa....glad it made u laugh :)

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  7. Nice. Conditions apply. True now a days. But this is a fun take on the proposal.

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