Saturday, August 11, 2012

HAIKU # 1 - OPEN HEART




Heart remains Open
It is hurt, it is bruised, Still 
Heart remains Open

2 comments:

  1. hmmmm...dont know much about Haikus...yet this one is sweet and a little painful too :D

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  2. ashzzes: u get it right :)
    Haiku in the Japanese, is written in the form of 5-7-5 Japanese syllables, called "on" or "morae". When the same is written in English, it isn't always in the same 5-7-5 format, sometimes it's lesser too

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