Thursday, August 9, 2012

55 Fiction # 4 - Innovation

Standing on the platform
for the train he impatiently awaits

Jumping in even before it halts,
he crawls into through the gates

to find a place to stand
to keep free his hand

which is a requirement
in a crowded local’s compartment

not willing to go through
the everyday motion
today he tries this innovation

Innovation @ its very best in a Mumbai local train



  1. wow! a poem in 55 words!
    must say you as well as the passengers of the mumbai local train are really innovative!! :D
    keep writing :D

  2. hey glad u liked it :)
    one has to be at his innovative best to travel in a mumbai local :P


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