Standing on the
platform
for the train he
impatiently awaits
Jumping in even
before it halts,
he crawls into through
the gates
to find a place
to stand
to keep free his
hand
which is a
requirement
in a crowded
local’s compartment
not willing to go through
the everyday motion
today he tries this innovation
Innovation @ its
very best in a Mumbai local train
KARAN
wow! a poem in 55 words!
ReplyDeletemust say you as well as the passengers of the mumbai local train are really innovative!! :D
keep writing :D
hey glad u liked it :)
ReplyDeleteone has to be at his innovative best to travel in a mumbai local :P
Quite innovative, Karan :P
ReplyDeletein Mumbai you quite have to be :P
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