Friday, January 17, 2014

55 Fiction # 16 – Little Did She Know


Sitting by the bedside in the light of lone candle she anxiously awaited him on their first night.  Without a whisper he walked in and held her, looking into her eyes he said “love you” and was about to kiss, when she screamed. Little did she know memories of childhood suffering will haunt her here.


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                                                                                                 -     Karan



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14 comments:

  1. Aah! That's sad!! Some scars never heal and bleed at the slightest touch!
    A good 55er for the prompt :)

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    1. yes they give deep wounds with no cuts on the surface

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    1. that is a huge compliment Payal...tysm :)
      welcome to my blog :)

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  3. wow.. That was really great ...!!. How memories of harassment prevents one from enjoying intimacy ...

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    1. glad you liked it girl...yes they surely do and at times unknowingly
      welcome to scribble...keep reflecting :)

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    1. glad you liked it...happy to have you here :)

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  5. Sometimes the grim side of the past hovers on present and paralyze the life completely...
    Nice write up

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    1. thank you so much...glad you liked it :)

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  6. That is so sad. Some scars never heal I guess. :(

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    1. true jyothi, may be because they are very deeply rooted

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  7. So sad that her past still haunts her. ♥

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  8. yes, Kathy unfortunately such things haunt far longer than anticipated :(

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~ Thanks for sharing your thoughts, keep reflecting ~

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