As a part of the Write Tribe Festival of Words which kickstarts on 1st September and will go on till
September 7, I am writing about the 7 relations in my life, without even one of
them my life would lose its meaning. These seven people are very dear to me and
I hold them very close.
Brother -
He
was gifted to me by parents when I was just four. I am sure when he was born I
would have been delighted beyond limits and my happiness would have known no
boundaries. I don’t remember it all now as I was all but four. He was and is the
jewel of the family being not just the youngest kid but the youngest member of
our huge joint family. He was loved, pampered and spoiled as kid but has always
been well mannered, obedient and dutiful child.
I
clearly remember our growing days how we behaved like we were a WWF Tag Team. Like
how we would set up pranks and play them on other kids. The performances we
gave at our community functions. We were not just brothers we were friends and
we still are. He was more close to dad and me to mom (it’s just thoughts of your
nascent minds, mum always says). To parents all their children are equal mum
would rebut. We would dream and make towers of plastic and castles of clay. Like
every siblings we have our differences and clashes, but that never was a reason
to fight, rather we would reason each other right. In the safeness of the house
and under the veil of our father and nurturing care of maa our intimacy grew.
But as fate would have it, our father was taken away by the cruel gods at a
very tender age. We were robbed off our childhood, in a day we turned adults.
Overnight we had to be mature to walk the difficult path called life, all by
ourselves and to tend to our mother.
Now
I was a father to him, but he made it very easy for me, as he was still a
friend. Now the silliness had vanished and so did the childish behavior of his.
But this was the only thing out of my control, rest I had decided I would give
it my all and cater to whatever he needs. I pledged to myself to give him all
the things I did not get when was his age.
From
here on he is my adopted son!!!
I am so glad I can
talk to you
I am so happy that
I have you,
you are in my
heart,
we are one sole
just bodies apart
We are always a team,
We are brothers
but friends,
I promise to fulfill
all your dream
At times sad,
sea of worries
sailing,
I had,
In dark with misguiding
eyes,
I find,
No answers
hailing,
Whatever I saw,
everything was
fading
but, you were
always there for me
you had my back,
and I was once again
scaling
Even if we
believed,
both of us were
right,
That was never a reason
to start a fight,
we would rather reason
each other right
with the
knowledge that was to be
taught to you by
me
now you have aged,
and I’m contend
wisdom seems to
be your very good friend
to catch you and
to hold,
if you ever fall
I’ll take away
all you pain
I’ll be there for
you,
through the sun
and rain
~
KARAN
Write Tribe Festival of Words
I feel exactly the same about my sister. I also feel she is now my adopted daughter :-)
ReplyDeleteRicha
yes Richa these younger siblings so have a special aura and effect over us :)
DeleteYou are blessed to have a brother like him. Touch wood! :)
ReplyDeletethank you so much Shilpa :)
DeleteAgain a beautiful poem penned down straight from your heart! I'm loving your theme. It's so imp to acknowledge the people you love...and you are doing a wonderful job at that!
ReplyDeleteGod bless!
thank you so much for such kind words Aditi...while living life in the fast lane these days we tend to neglect the people who silently support us and stand by us and have made us what we are today.
DeleteKaran! Man, you simply rock with love. You made me emotional and missing having a sibling:)
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thank you so much Ranveer for such appreciation...that means a lot :)
DeleteHow lucky and blessed you are to be so close to your brother. I have a sister and we have never been close. After my dad died we grew farther apart. We do not see each other, or speak. The rift between us is too great and most likely always will be. I have always felt more like an only child because there was 7 years between us.
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hey Kathy i'm sorry to hear that, but i feel it can always be worked between the siblings...its just that we have to spend some quality time together, try and share things and rekindle the magic...i hope it works out for you...don't give up on it :)
DeleteApplause to both of you. It is becoming increasingly rarer to have siblings being so close though I too am blessed by a brother and a sister with whom I share a very warm relationship.
ReplyDeletei agree Suresh that the camaraderie between the siblings is a rare feet...but then we hardly spend time together and that keeps off the bond from getting stronger by the day...and i wish your bond and warmth remains all through :)
DeleteYou're a good brother indeed. I wish you and your brother good. May your love become stronger and stronger with each passing day. :) :)
ReplyDeletethank you so much dear...welcome to my space :)
DeleteI too have a younger brother and I know its so nice to have siblings. You both had to mature at an early age and your closeness increased. This is the greatest gift to each other.Very nice and heart-warming post Karan.
ReplyDeletewelcome to scribble Kalpana...i'm glad you liked it
Deletewish u both a warm bond all through life
It's lovely to see the camaraderie between siblings. Even I share a lovely bond with my younger sister. Stay like this through everything - touch wood.
ReplyDeleteJoy always,
Susan
PostScript: Thanks for heeding my suggestion. Super!
thank you so much for the kind words and warm wishes Susan :)
DeleteBrilliant poetry & heart warming poetry...I have one real brother & six cousins.So all in all seven amazons...hahaaha.But i love them deeply & miss them heartily...:(
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you must be having a hell lot of fun with such a big bunch of siblings...I'm sure you'll have the meetings more often :)
DeleteSuch a beautiful post. I am the youngest and I have always been pampered and protected by my siblings, so I udnerstand your feelings well
ReplyDeletehey Bhagyashree welcome to my space...glad you understood the feeling behind the words :)
DeleteThat was such a touching post. The special bond you share comes through. Both of you are blessed to have each other in your lives.
ReplyDeleteglad you liked it Smitha...keep reflecting :)
DeleteA sibling - friend is kind of the best friend one can get! I have been lucky with my sister in that sense.
ReplyDeletei agree Aparna :)
DeleteI have two elder sisters and I can totally relate to this. :)
ReplyDeletebut at times being elder is also fun :)
DeleteBeautiful post. I have a sister and a brother. And me been the middle one have enjoyed and is still enjoying both the privileges of been the youngest and also the matured sibling.
ReplyDeleteits the best place to be in Ritu...coz being the younger and elder both has its own benefits and you are reaping them all :)
DeleteBeautiful poem..brother-sister relation is one of the most amazing of it all! nice read!
ReplyDeletethank you so much Neha...relationship with siblings has no match :)
DeleteAh! How I wish that I had a sibling too :(
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