Fifth day of this year’s National Poetry Writing Month. Todays’ prompt is “Lune”. A lune is a sort of English-language
variation on the haiku, meant to better render the tone of the Japanese haiku
than the standard 5-7-5 format we all learned (and maybe loved) in elementary school.
There are a couple of variants on the lune form, but just to keep things
simple, let’s try the version developed by Jack Collum. His version of the lune
involves a three-line stanza. The first line has three words. The second line
has five, and the third line has three. You can write a poem that consists of
just one stanza, or link many lune-stanzas together into a unified poem. Happy
writing! ” Here’s my first attempt at a Lune:
http://whilethecoffeebrews.blogspot.in/ - Naina
Also
I am participating in A to Z Challenge 2014
where we write 26 posts in a month each day on one word from A to Z barring
Sunday's. Today's word is "E".
Source: Google Images
don’t
be gloom
time
to cheer my dear
weekend
is here
~ KARAN
herebelow
are my friends and co-bloggers who are also participating in NapoWrimo:
http://andiwrite.com/ – Count
http://janakinagaraj.com/ - Janaki
http://jaibalarao.com/ - Jaibalahttp://whilethecoffeebrews.blogspot.in/ - Naina
http://thoughtspop.wordpress.com/ – Nithya
http://ponderingtwo.blogspot.in/ – Rohan
http://juztamom.blogspot.in/ - Sfurti
This is cute! And I agree weekend means excitement :)
ReplyDeleteyeah it sure does :)
DeleteThis time weekend gave a big sighhhhhhhhhhhhhhh of relief due to obv reasons :)
ReplyDeleteHave fun Karan
yes for obv reasons :D :)
DeleteAhan weeked bring in all excitement :)
ReplyDeleteyeah loads of it!!
DeleteYeah. Refreshing weekend for sure :)
ReplyDeleteI agree...need of the hour.
DeleteOh yeah! Weeeknds are always fun! Nice poem there...
ReplyDeleteglad you liked it Ghata...hope you have also read the other one its about female infanticide.
Deleteyou can find here -
http://advkaranshah.blogspot.in/2014/04/excitement-to-execution.html
Beautiful! I thought of doing national poem writing this month..guess my schedule and sickness took better of me... Lune is an interesting concept..keep it up!
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thank you so much :) welcome to scribble Ekta :)
DeleteI am sure you'll be up and kicking soon!!!
Yayyyy!! You echo all of us here my friend!
ReplyDeletehehehe LOL Naina :)
DeleteAwww this one is damn cute write :)
ReplyDeleteweekends are always so much to cheer for Preethi, they often make things and people cute ;)
DeleteLove ur Haiku, Karan. Mesmerizing:)
ReplyDeletethanks Vishal, but its Lune unlike Haiku (no of syllables) it has to have 3-5-3 words in each line.
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