Excitement to Execution

Fifth day of this year’s National Poetry Writing Month. Todays’ prompt is “Lune”. A lune is a sort of English-language variation on the haiku, meant to better render the tone of the Japanese haiku than the standard 5-7-5 format we all learned (and maybe loved) in elementary school. There are a couple of variants on the lune form, but just to keep things simple, let’s try the version developed by Jack Collum. His version of the lune involves a three-line stanza. The first line has three words. The second line has five, and the third line has three. You can write a poem that consists of just one stanza, or link many lune-stanzas together into a unified poem. Happy writing! ” Here’s my first attempt at a Lune:

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I am participating in A to Z Challenge 2014 where we write 26 posts in a month each day on one word from A to Z barring Sunday's. Today's word is "E".

This is a journey of a female foetus in her own words.

 Source: Google Images

I am conceived

out of love, not fear

excited they heaved

I am shaped

deep inside a hollow space

I am weaved

have webbed fingers

my organs grow big too

also fingerprints do

about five inches

my mother gets a clue

cartilage also grew

eyebrows and eyelids

my mother feels my kick

she gets crick

pound and half

now I am not weak

they check graph

open and close

I try to follow light

with my sight

layers of fat

are filling me out

making me stout

feet below ground

hounded and battered I’m slay

an infant lay

 ~KARAN 

 

herebelow are my friends and co-bloggers who are also participating in NapoWrimo:

http://andiwrite.com/ – Count

http://janakinagaraj.com/ - Janaki
http://jaibalarao.com/ - Jaibala
http://whilethecoffeebrews.blogspot.in/ - Naina

http://thoughtspop.wordpress.com/ – Nithya

http://viewsofpreethib.wordpress.com/ – Preeti

http://poojashridhar.blogspot.in/ – Pooja

http://www.rinzurajan.blogspot.in/ – Rinzu

http://ponderingtwo.blogspot.in/ – Rohan
http://juztamom.blogspot.in/ - Sfurti

http://artofleo.wordpress.com/blog/ – Vinay