Sunday, April 6, 2014

False Impressions – Perfect Illusions



Sixth day of this year’s National Poetry Writing Month.

Also
I am participating in A to Z Challenge 2014 where we write 26 posts in a month each day on one word from A to Z barring Sunday's. Today's word is "F".


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so many colours everyday we pass

still only Black and White for us is the class

so many voices and word

still the sound of silence is the loudest heard

so much to see around for getting bliss

but only close eyes gives us appease

the world to travel and destinations to explore

still the ambiance of home everyone so eagerly adore
 
loads of money spend on celebration and dine

but true solace is found only in the divine


KARAN

20 comments:

  1. wow....beautiful...true solace is found only in the divine...loved it :)

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  2. Beautiful especially the last line :)

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  3. Well said...would like to add to it....we love to eat out but mom's haat ka khana is a knockout.

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    1. hehehe that sure is, no substitute for maa k haat ka khana :)

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  4. "still the sound of silence is the loudest heard" - Love this line!!

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    1. the sound of silence more often than not reverberates for a long long time and its the most effective always and in all ways.

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  5. Good lines- Mostly liked this one - the world to travel and destinations to explore
    still the ambiance of home everyone so eagerly adore

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    1. thank you so much Afshan, with each one liking different lines it feels good that the poem was loved as a whole :)

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  6. I personally don't seek out the divine, but I can understand where this is coming from :D

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    1. I knw Hrishi, you have written it a many times :)

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  7. Yes yes...true that! Good work Karan :-)

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  8. I agree that the last line really makes this powerful! *another a to z Blogger

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    1. thank you so much Katy, surely visiting you :)

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