Kick
starting this years’ National Poetry Writing Month. Today’s prompt is
Ekphrastic Poem.
Also
I am participating in A to Z Challenge 2014 where we write 26 posts in a month each day on one word from A to Z barring Sunday's. Today's word is "A".
Photo
Credit: Namrata
dark
at the dusk
with
everyone retired to their husk
an
abhorrent day for someone
is
simply forgotten
mysterious
is the heaven
on
the other side
at
dawn, sun has already risen
with
renewed hope
some other has awaken
KARAN
herebelow are my friends and co-bloggers who are also participating in NapoWrimo:
http://thoughtspop.wordpress.com/ –
Nithya
http://ponderingtwo.blogspot.in/ –
Rohan
Wow Beautiful....absolutely Love the way you describe a new beginning :)
ReplyDeletethank you so much Jai, keep dropping by :)
DeleteExcellent use of colour, and nice choice of picture. A good reminder that every day, not matter how awful, will end and be forgotten - while a new day starts. The unsteady rhyme scheme at tthe start contrasts well with the strong "-en" sounds in the second half. A nice sonic reflection of leaving the old day behind and looking with confidence to a new one.
ReplyDeleteGreat start to the month. I'll be coming back to see what else you write!
welcome to scribble, thank you so much for such kind words :)
Deleteyour visits will surely be awaited with bated breath.
And such a simple thought with profound meaning...while some lay asleep, others are awakened, called to do better. Wonderfully done Karan
ReplyDeleteNicely worded.
ReplyDeletethanks Shail :)
DeleteBeautiful karan and true on the other side Sun is always there :)
ReplyDeleteyeah surely Juzta, thanx for stopping by :)
DeleteI love how you use colours to convey the essence of your poem. Nice words too.
ReplyDeletethat was so kind of you Suzy :)
DeleteGood one Karan...hope is all we thrive on.
ReplyDeletetotally Janu we are hopelessly hopeful !!
DeletePoetry aha! that elusive thing. Loved it
ReplyDeleteglad you liked it Rajrupa :)
DeleteWow!! You expressed the next days sunrise exceptionally well :)
ReplyDeletethat made me grin ear to ear Rohan, tysm :)
Deletewhen one side is dark there might be light on the other side :) nicely told Karan
ReplyDeleteMy first time here !
all the best
glad to have you here Afshan, keep reflecting :)
Deletebest wishes to you too :)
A great start! Best of luck for both challenges!
ReplyDeletethank you so much Roshni :)
DeleteNicely done Karan. Being on the other side of the timezone, you echo my thoughts. :)
ReplyDeleteI am glad I could echo them :)
DeleteWOW!! I never thought this picture could be woven around words so beautifully!! Thank you so much for adding more beauty to it.
ReplyDeleteAnd ALL the BEST for both the contests :)
thank you so much Namrata :)
Deleteam grateful that you allowed me to use this picture and weave my thoughts around it :)
A simple thought penned so beautifully karan. You should visit your this side more often :)
ReplyDeletethank you so much for such kind words Tapo, i'll surely do that more often :)
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