Tuesday, April 1, 2014

Awakening - With A New Hope

Kick starting this years’ National Poetry Writing Month. Today’s prompt is Ekphrastic Poem.

Also

I am participating in A to Z Challenge 2014 where we write 26 posts in a month each day on one word from A to Z barring Sunday's. Today's word is "A".


Photo Credit: Namrata

dark at the dusk
with everyone retired to their husk
an abhorrent day for someone
is simply forgotten
mysterious is the heaven
on the other side
at dawn, sun has already risen
with renewed hope
some other has awaken
KARAN
                                                                                                     
                           

herebelow are my friends and co-bloggers who are also participating in NapoWrimo:

28 comments:

  1. Wow Beautiful....absolutely Love the way you describe a new beginning :)

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    1. thank you so much Jai, keep dropping by :)

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  2. Excellent use of colour, and nice choice of picture. A good reminder that every day, not matter how awful, will end and be forgotten - while a new day starts. The unsteady rhyme scheme at tthe start contrasts well with the strong "-en" sounds in the second half. A nice sonic reflection of leaving the old day behind and looking with confidence to a new one.

    Great start to the month. I'll be coming back to see what else you write!

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    1. welcome to scribble, thank you so much for such kind words :)
      your visits will surely be awaited with bated breath.

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  3. And such a simple thought with profound meaning...while some lay asleep, others are awakened, called to do better. Wonderfully done Karan

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  4. Beautiful karan and true on the other side Sun is always there :)

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    1. yeah surely Juzta, thanx for stopping by :)

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  5. I love how you use colours to convey the essence of your poem. Nice words too.

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  6. Good one Karan...hope is all we thrive on.

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    1. totally Janu we are hopelessly hopeful !!

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  7. Poetry aha! that elusive thing. Loved it

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  8. Wow!! You expressed the next days sunrise exceptionally well :)

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    1. that made me grin ear to ear Rohan, tysm :)

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  9. when one side is dark there might be light on the other side :) nicely told Karan
    My first time here !
    all the best

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    1. glad to have you here Afshan, keep reflecting :)
      best wishes to you too :)

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  10. A great start! Best of luck for both challenges!

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  11. Nicely done Karan. Being on the other side of the timezone, you echo my thoughts. :)

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  12. WOW!! I never thought this picture could be woven around words so beautifully!! Thank you so much for adding more beauty to it.

    And ALL the BEST for both the contests :)

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    1. thank you so much Namrata :)
      am grateful that you allowed me to use this picture and weave my thoughts around it :)

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  13. A simple thought penned so beautifully karan. You should visit your this side more often :)

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    1. thank you so much for such kind words Tapo, i'll surely do that more often :)

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~ Thanks for sharing your thoughts, keep reflecting ~

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